篇一:作文范文
湖北高考英語(yǔ)短文寫(xiě)作多采用三段式結(jié)構(gòu) , 即引言(introduction)——主體(body)——結(jié)尾(conclusion) 。
引言部分通常給出 , 讓學(xué)生在限定的范圍內(nèi)組織要點(diǎn) , 完成主體部分和結(jié)尾部分 。 寫(xiě)作時(shí)要遵循以下規(guī)律:
1.開(kāi)頭部分 開(kāi)頭部分必須點(diǎn)題 , 用 2-3個(gè)句子完成 , 其中要有一個(gè)漂亮的過(guò)渡句 。
2.主體部分 主體部分其實(shí)是讓學(xué)生用言簡(jiǎn)意賅的語(yǔ)言敘述一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)完整、思想意義飽滿(mǎn)的事例 。 注意所講的事例一定要能突出話(huà)題的中心 , 可用8—10個(gè)句子完成 。
3.結(jié)尾部分 結(jié)尾部分要用概括性的語(yǔ)言來(lái)總結(jié)全文主題 , 得出結(jié)論 , 回歸話(huà)題 。 其實(shí) , 該部分就是在敘事的基礎(chǔ)上加以評(píng)論 , 是記敘文寫(xiě)作中的“小抒情” 。
短文寫(xiě)作范文《一》
請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示并結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例 , 就“包容”這個(gè)話(huà)題 , 用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文 。
There is no denying that forgiveness is a noble quality. With forgiveness people will live in a harmonious way; with forgiveness, people can overcome any difficulty; with forgiveness……..
注意:1. 無(wú)需寫(xiě)標(biāo)題 , 不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ);
2. 除詩(shī)歌外 , 文體不限;
3. 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例;
4.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);
5.詞數(shù)為120左右 。
范文賞讀:
Forgiveness is what I learned from my teacher, which has had a great influence on my growth.
Two years ago, I together with Tom who was regarded as the best basketball player in my class, took part in the basketball final of our school on behalf of our class. With only 20 seconds left, our team still took a lead by two points. To our delight, the ball was in Tom’s hand! Had Tom passed it in time, we would certainly have won. But Tom chose to break through. Suddenly, our rival stole the ball, and shot a three-pointer! After the match, we all demanded the teacher fire Tom. But our teacher told us to forgive him, saying forgiveness was a good medicine for some diseases. After that, Tom did learn the importance of good teamwork.
It was forgiveness rather than punishment that changed Tom.
《二》
提示語(yǔ):
Never be afraid of making mistakes. Factually, making progress is making mistakes. Mistakes reveal where success lies.
范文賞讀:
Mistakes are unavoidable in life. But attitude towards them many make a difference.
I still remember how my spoken English improved. At the beginning, I always kept silent in the oral class to avoid making mistakes. Before long my teacher knew about my situation. He encouraged me to speak out what I wanted to regardless of mistakes. Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraged, my teacher and classmates would help me figure out how I could avoid them in the future. Practice makes perfect. With time going by, I built up my confidence, and now I can talk fluently in English. Just as the saying goes, every bean has its black. We just need to learn a lesson from the mistakes.
So don’t be afraid of making mistakes. Learn from them, and success is just awaiting us.
《三》
提示語(yǔ):
In fact, there aren’t always bright sunshine and gentle breeze, birds’ singing and flowers’ fragrant in our
daily life. We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success, but life is what you make it.
范文賞讀:
Success will be gained after times of failures so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing. That is the message carried in the proverb “Failure is the mother of success”.
For example, when I began to learn English, I was so slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong from time to time. My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates. But I didn’t give up and kept practicing reading English aloud every day. And my teacher gave me a helping hand, getting me right whenever I made an error.
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